Amlen

[amlen]

Name Amlen (pronounced as spelled) Yamamoto

Age: 15

Sex: Female

Allegiance: Earth Kingdom

Home:
New: Outer ring of Ba Sing Se

Old: A small Earth Kingdom village.

Bender: No (A lot of people on here seem to be benders so I don't want to be! YAY! )

Physical Appearance: Amlen stands at about 5' 6" with black hair that goes down to her lower back. Here eyes are a soft green which when she is angry may look black. Her skin is cream colored with a strange birth mark which looks like the sign for the fire nation. Amlen is thin and scraggy (scraggy...what a fun word to say...scraggy ;D) making her look very frail and fragile but in reality she is very able and keen.

Personality: Amlen isn't outgoing but she isn't shy either. She is very easy going and care free. She loves to have fun and joke around but in an instant she can become the very opposite. The rapid change occurs either when she is in a battle or if something serious happens like someone gets hurt.

Clothes: Amlen wears a long earth colored dress that fits perfectly shows every curve on her body. The top part comes just above the birth mark. A green colored scarf wraps around Amlen's waist to tighten the dress. The sleeves come off the shoulder to reveal a tattoo of a jasmine flower on her left shoulder blade. Two very long slits come from the left and right sides at the bottom up to her thighs making Amlen have to wear pants. The pants are the same color as the scarf around her waist and tucked into her shoes. The shoes she wears are brown boots that go up the the middle of her shins which are tightened by three buckles.

Weapons: Amlen has two light daggers hidden in her boots along with a fire nation sword that she carries at her waist. Amlen bought the sword from the black market and the daggers belonged to her father.

Family History:

Mother:
Name: Yuri Yamamoto
How She died: Giving birth to her only child Amlen

Father:
Name: Kisho Yamamoto
Bender: Earth
Rank: General
Location: Omoshu
What He Is Doing: Trying to help defeat the Fire Nation soldiers there and save King Bumi

When Amlen's father left to fight in the war about six years ago he sent her to live with his sister-in-law in. She lived in a small mountain village where just about everyone was an Earth Bender. When Amlen arrived she found nothing but ruins. Not knowing where to go she started traveling on her own. After six years Amlen has decided to live as a refuge in Ba Sing Se.

[Indra]

Ohh, Interesting. Needs some work.

First, all apps must be in the third Person.

I have problems with the character. I don't know any one who did what she did who I would consider shy. I'd like to see some vindictiveness, needs for revenge, you get the idea. Next, her weaknesses need work. Does she burn up when given tea? Does she get sucked into the bowls of hell if she is loved? Why the (explative) is a Jasmine flower a weakness? There is a line between dislikes (which is what you put) and weaknesses (how would I take someone down in battle?). Okay, history: Lee is a common name. How does she know this Lee is her fathers attacker? For that matter, How could someone who lives in the very inner section of Ba Sing Se, where war is not discussed, know the exact details of a battle? I am going to assume she quit Earthbending because she killed three plus guys with her powers. Why then would she take a sword, a symbol of warfare and fighting? Wouldn't she become a pacifist instead?

[amlen]

is that a little better???

[Indra]

Excellent. Welcome aboard.