Avani
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Avani
Sept 30, 2006 11:34:24 GMT -5
Post by Avani on Sept 30, 2006 11:34:24 GMT -5
name:Avani (means Earth) age:13 gender:Female bender:earth weapons: Only her bending skills nation:earth kingdom (Omashu)
personality: Kind caring and hot tempard. Even though she is hot temparded she is acctually pertty easy to get along with. When someone that she knows gets hurt she is always one of the first to react. She is always one to pull her own weight and somthings that of her friends. She is always polite and is dependible in any situaltion. appearance: About 5 6'.Musuclar Tall and lean. Her clothing is alot like Tophs outfit but with the exeption of it being a bit darker and is alittle bit longer. She wears a Water Tirbe Necolace she found some time ago too. history: Her parents we taken by the fire nation when she was about 7 years old. It was a very devistaing blow in her life. Her father was quite good at earth bending and had be secretly teaching her. She learned alot from her surrounding neighbors who also slowly began to disapear . She always wondered why and soon found out when she herself was almost taken due to her Earth bending. She learned that in order to save her parents she must keep her bending to herself. She has gotten out of Omashu and is looking for her lost parents.
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Avani
Sept 30, 2006 12:58:17 GMT -5
Post by Indra on Sept 30, 2006 12:58:17 GMT -5
Glad to get a few earth benders here. First, could you put spaces in between your sentances? Second Abby is not a very asian name. If you need help finding one, try babynames.com
Now the tough part. Why was she almost taken? I am assuming that it is because she is an Earth Bender, but I don't know that. And who was taking her? Other then that I have very little problems. You might want to smoothe out personality, but other then that, nothing major.
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Avani
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Avani
Sept 30, 2006 13:00:06 GMT -5
Post by Avani on Sept 30, 2006 13:00:06 GMT -5
Ok I will do that thanks
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Avani
Sept 30, 2006 13:15:07 GMT -5
Post by Indra on Sept 30, 2006 13:15:07 GMT -5
Sounds good. Welcome aboard. Your approved.
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Avani
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Avani
Sept 30, 2006 13:16:15 GMT -5
Post by Avani on Sept 30, 2006 13:16:15 GMT -5
Thanks ^^ were should I start to RP?
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